mmm. Could've been a lot better.
Okay, just watched this through a couple of times.
Given, the humour is purile. Nothing wrong with that. It's kind of what this place thrives on. But the jokes didn't really come across thanks to a few things, like the timing, which was fairly even-paced and therefore a bit on the dull side. There's no real plot either. Also, the default computer synth voices were kind of irritating and instantly put me off, too. The thing also ended really, really suddenly and felt seriously unfinished.
I've had a quick look around the rest of your submissions and there's some potential in the stuff you've submitted. 6 random pieces of shit kind of raised a smile, and crab murder's kinda fun. I also see you're only 14, and considering that you've got loads of scope. So keep it up. Hope to see something better than this again soon.